Beginning of a new story

[hiwall]

I have finally finished a story and I thought I would post a couple chapters here. It is not published yet and also not edited or even proof-read so you are likely to find errors. If you bother reading it I hope you enjoy the little bit I am posting. I don't even have a title yet either

 

[Tortminder]

Good start Hiwall.

 

[Amish Heart]

Poor Guy!

 

[DrPrepper]

Good start! Can't wait to read the rest!

 

[dademoss]

I like the beginning

 

[The Innkeeper]

Great start. Look8n* forward to more

 

[hiwall]

That story is now published. I think it started way better than it ended. I'm trying to complete a couple stories I had started some time back. I'll likely publish 1 or 2 more by the end of year then I have decided to totally quit writing. Who needs that money anyway?

 

[The Innkeeper]

That story is now published. I think it started way better than it ended. I'm trying to complete a couple stories I had started some time back. I'll likely publish 1 or 2 more by the end of year then I have decided to totally quit writing. Who needs that money anyway?

I think your readers would miss you. I don’t know about the money, I find a little bit is pretty handy at times

 

[dademoss]

Maybe just a little break so I can get caught up on my reading Thanks for the heads up on publishing, Amazon didn't let me know yet.

 

[MoBookworm1957]

I like it.

 

[DrPrepper]

I enjoyed "Everyone Has Troubles". The ending was different than I expected, but I liked it.

 

[CountryGuy]

I liked this, very interesting spin and sort of a reverse "who done it"