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  1. Oct 2, 2019 #1

    hiwall

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    A new short story I just finished. When done I didn't like it. It just didn't go where I wanted it too. Oh well.
    No editing or proof reading.
    Enjoy.
     

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  2. Oct 3, 2019 #2

    DrPrepper

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    As usual, another great story! What didn't you like about it?
     
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  3. Oct 3, 2019 #3

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    I haven't finished it yet but I like it too.
     
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    The story just seemed - too blah for me.
     
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  5. Oct 4, 2019 #5

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    It wasn’t filled with shooting and “excitement” but I could see someone’s life situation unfolding along those lines. I enjoyed it.
     
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  6. Oct 4, 2019 #6

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    Good story.
     
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  7. Oct 5, 2019 #7

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    The story moved along and carried me with it. Thanks.
     
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    Thanks everyone.
     
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