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The story just seemed - too blah for me.
Was a good story but see what you mean with the blah portion. I would have thought maybe more cooperation with the neighbor, like offering rides in to town (double up for security). Also conveniently having all the money and propane comforts make it a little blah. Maybe a little more struggle and a little more ingenuity would "spice it up"?

Please don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed your writing and storyline
 
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